31 thoughts on “Right as rain is complete!!!

  1. It reads as a good poem, too. Nice lyrics, though.

    The voice tone and rhythm KINDA sounds like Andre 3000 (from Outkast) when he talks or raps, rather than sings, but lighter. ALMOST. Whatever.

    1. Thank for that comparison. Ive been compared to 3 stacks before in my earlier works i guess its seeping through again. Also it is meant to be a poem to music rather than typical rap. Oddly i don’t really like rap like i used to.only reason i chose to portray the lyrics in rap form is because i can’t sing andhaven’t found any musically trained singer in Dayton who can read my songs i wrote 😦 but thanks for the comment i appriciate it.

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